Saturday, November 28, 2009

How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

I'm an emo kid



and I'm so depressed



I'll bet you can tell by the way I dress



My clothes are all black



I shop at Hot Topic



my myspace looks like



I'm so friggin gothic



I wear



dark make-up



around my eyes



if you see my slitting my wrists



you shouldn't be surprised



cuz I carry



my razerblade



everywhere I go



in case something upsets me



cuz you know I'm emo



I make streight Fs



I don't even try



who cares about my future



I'm committing suicide



cuz I hate myself



and I hate my life



you should feel sorry for me



I'm a sad white suburbinite



I am



so fat



I can barely see my ribs



I can't go on



when I'm looking like this



boo-hoo-hoo



I wanna cut my throat



it's just the way I am



don't call me emo



You don't think it contradicts itself, do you? The way the speaker reffers to themself as an emo and then says "don't call me emo" because it's kinds supposed to be like how other people feel about emos speaking in first person as the emo, understand?



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

you definately have too much time on your hands. that is a pretty creative poem, its pretty much the same thing that everyone else says, very original.



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

I don't like it. You totally stereotyped emo's they don't all slit their wrists you know, and they are usually going though more than you could understand Report It



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

Uh, whatever...



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

lame.



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

i think it's pathetic, but then again any of that self pity bullsh!t is, the poem contradicts itself by saying feel sorry for you, and then later saying your killing yourself..why should i feel sorry for you becasue you suck at life? especially if your killing yourself..your a selfish idiot..boo hoo.



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

Where's the poem ?



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

Interesting poem, shows that you put a lot of effort into it.



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

i'm not emo but i guess that was good weird but kinda good i guessss....



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

Do you even know what EMO means? EMO means emotional and in no way is that a bad thing. People just get so wrapped up in these stereotypes that they never get to know a person.



How do you like my peom, I call this one 'Don't Call Me Emo'?

I hate poetry and emos, so this sucks.

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